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COMM: The Rise & Fall of the Nitocris Family By DeadStrategicCactus -- Report

This story was a commission ordered by my friend  silvercrusher.

The rivalry between Konoko Shirogane and Maria Nitocris comes to an unexpected ending and the Nitocris Family gains a new member to it. Now 15 years later, her children are a step closer to being like her… except one of them has other ideas.

So hey, a commission where I got to write about my own OCs who would have thought this would have happened? Hopefully this becomes a recurring thing for the future. Or at least, it’d be great if it would.

So I had some fun with this story as I have considered establishing Maria’s children as characters at one point in time. So this was a good opportunity to roll with ideas I had for them and see how they played out. Suffice to say, I was pretty happy with how they turned out and might consider doing some stories with them in the future.

Oh yeah, and spot those cameos folks. Because there’s quite a bit of them.

Thumbnail by  Leshawk.

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ItsSongxing

Posted by ItsSongxing 6 years ago Report

"Ittsu's Log. Day 238.

...I'm still a pair of panties."

DeadStrategicCactus

Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 6 years ago Report

That's a pretty early entry given 15 years passed.

ItsSongxing

Posted by ItsSongxing 6 years ago Report

"Ittsu's Log. Day 238, plus 15 Years.

That Miko-turned-Egyptian shoved Maria up her snatch. ...I'm not sure if I want the magic to wear off, considering everyone else Maria has turned into artifacts."

DeadStrategicCactus

Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 6 years ago Report

A very well thought out concern given most of the people who joined Ittsu on that shelf.

ItsSongxing

Posted by ItsSongxing 6 years ago Report

Maybe since she was one of the earlier ones, she'll end up being freed well before/well after everyone else, so she'd be relatively safe.

DeadStrategicCactus

Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 6 years ago Report

A possibility for sure.

ItsSongxing

Posted by ItsSongxing 6 years ago Report

That is...Assuming anyone before her doesn't decide to take her panty-self!

DeadStrategicCactus

Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 6 years ago Report

Another possibility. Honestly, there's nothing saying Konoko won't swing back and take some of those artifacts for herself.

acrylic

Posted by acrylic 6 years ago Report

It is unlikely that Konoko is eager to become a parent herself and raise her rival from zero. Is she keeping Maria for internal slavery or made her into nothing?

DeadStrategicCactus

Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 6 years ago Report

As far as Konoko knows, Maria's been reduced to nothing. Though anything goes if someone decides to order a sequel to this.

acrylic

Posted by acrylic 5 years ago Report

Is Maria's soul or something that can call it her still existing and sealed within konokos womb?

DeadStrategicCactus

Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 5 years ago Report

Yes, albeit as you can see the sequel to this story she was reborn as Konoko's daughter at one point.

acrylic

Posted by acrylic 5 years ago Report

Oh, so it looks like that there are no consciousness to preys who are regressed to an egg in tiur world, rather they seem to be hybernating(in terms of soul, so they bring back their previous memory later) or physically mind wiped.

Dooot

Posted by Dooot 2 years ago Report

what sequel?

Dooot

Posted by Dooot 2 years ago Report

thx