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A girl demonstrates an unusual talent to her friends.
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This was the first story I actually finished. I was never completely satisfied with the standard hair vore stuff, so I wrote this as an attempt to make a version I really liked.
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Posted by taito 6 years ago Report
Wow interesting story sir. Very neat take on hair vore. ^_^
Posted by AllRightAllNight 6 years ago Report
Thanks! It was fun to come up with something new and figure out how it would work.
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 6 years ago Report
Certainly a different take on hair vore here. Might have to remember it for future stuff involving a certain shrine maiden.
Posted by AllRightAllNight 6 years ago Report
I hope so, I'd love to see other people's takes on this idea :)
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 6 years ago Report
Granted I've lately decided that whenever Konoko devours someone with her hair the color of her prey's hair is added to her own. Though that's only as far as I've gone. I am curious how Tess would react to Konoko given Konoko's capable of doing way more with her hair albeit for specific reasons.
Posted by rugli 6 years ago Report
I'm not sure but I think I can see why you aren't completely satified with this one...well if i had to guess I did think that the oral vore part seems some what out of place.
Posted by AllRightAllNight 6 years ago Report
I meant I wasn't satisfied with other stuff, this story I do quite like. But thanks for the feedback, it's useful to hear where I can improve.
Posted by rugli 6 years ago Report
oh, I see. I must have confused what you meant but that clears it up.
Posted by ifdre 5 years ago Report
So, what is going to happen when they all return?
Posted by AllRightAllNight 5 years ago Report
The story ends where it does for a reason, but presumably they continue being friends and experimenting with hair/other types of vore. Tess reappears in the story "Kate's Halloween Spooktacular" (which also continues a bunch of other prior stories) and does some new hair stuff.
Posted by ifdre 5 years ago Report
Oh, if they return, Nicole will be still in Chelsea's stomach?
Posted by AllRightAllNight 5 years ago Report
Hair transformation counts as digestion in this context, so since they both got "digested" they would reform separately.
Posted by ifdre 5 years ago Report
OK. I got it.