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Carol Danvers discovers a new ability during a fight.
Part one of a (planned) longer series. This is inspired heavily by Naganommer's fantastic Marvel/DC stories.
Thumbnail source: http://marvel.wikia.com/wiki/File:Mighty_Captain_Marvel_Vol_1_1_Textless.jpg
Also, to clarify: everyone in this story is over 18, including Kamala. This will be discussed further in part 2, but I haven't finished that yet.
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Posted by dinoman514 6 years ago Report
Good story, titles a little misleading but oh well, i hope to see more of Captain Marvel, there isnt enough of her on this site
Posted by AllRightAllNight 6 years ago Report
Thanks! I have a lot more planned for Captain Marvel in this series, as soon as I find the time to write it...
Posted by dinoman514 6 years ago Report
can i say one little thing... feel free to disregard it, but please keep the use of Kamala Khan to a minimum. i'm a huge Captain Marvel fan and it seems they when the make Kamala they throw Cap into the trash retconned half her story, and made Kamala do some very unhero like stuff while using her name. its also why i said the title of this story was misleading i saw all the tags and thought Cap was going to be the eating them but nope it was Kamala... god i hate that character...
sorry, like i said feel free to ignore all that and write as you would, just know that where i stand.
Posted by AllRightAllNight 6 years ago Report
I really appreciate the feedback. I do have some stuff involving Kamala in my current plans, since the elasticity powers are something I enjoy writing about, but Carol will definitely be the main character (and she'll get to eat more people too). Again, thanks for your thoughts, it's helpful to know what people like and dislike about my work.
Posted by dinoman514 6 years ago Report
Alright :) sorry if i came off a little strong im a highly opinionated person sometimes lol, well all i can really say now is i look forward to more :)