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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_nontraditional_bagpipe_usage

A sequel to "Instrumental Role", as requested by several people. Seriously, if you want me to write more of something, let me know and I might do it.
Zehra and Erin previously appeared in: https://aryion.com/g4/view/486749

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Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 6 months ago Report

Hmm so the school has a reformer or something? She’s freely digesting them after all

AllRightAllNight

Posted by AllRightAllNight 6 months ago Report

Yeah, I tend to handwave that part because it's not really part of the core experience (plus I know a lot of people like more ambiguous endings). But she's definitely coming back somehow. I do have some ideas related to reformation actually, I should work on those...

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 6 months ago Report

Maybe people have a unspecified number of chances to reform per period of time, varies from person to person that changes depending on various factors, but there is a constant that until a certain age is reached the limit cannot be overcome in order to ensure the continuation of the species

rugli

Posted by rugli 6 months ago Report

What aboout Nikki from the original story?

AllRightAllNight

Posted by AllRightAllNight 6 months ago Report

She's off doing her own thing I guess. She and Z aren't really friends, so I didn't really feel like it would make sense for her to keep showing up. She may appear again someday though.

rugli

Posted by rugli 6 months ago Report

I see, makes sense then. You could as you said make her show up, later or let her do her own thing. :)

RLord4268

Posted by RLord4268 6 months ago Report

More squishing down to size. Golf-ball sized or smaller!

AllRightAllNight

Posted by AllRightAllNight 6 months ago Report

I'll keep that in mind... I do like compression quite a bit, I don't write nearly enough of it.

Superwedgie

Posted by Superwedgie 6 months ago Report

Another great story!

I already said this before, but i just love the concept of instrument vore. I would love it if you were to write more stories invovling it.

AllRightAllNight

Posted by AllRightAllNight 6 months ago Report

Thanks!

Honestly the hardest part is picking an instrument. I like when sequels expand the scope of an idea, which is why I did the bagpipes/multiple prey thing in this one (it would have felt sort of samey to just do, like, a clarinet after the sousaphone one). I'll keep thinking of instruments with an interesting angle on this, but if you or anyone else has any ideas, please do let me know.

Superwedgie

Posted by Superwedgie 6 months ago Report

Variety is nice, it would probably get boring quickly otherwise.

I do actually have some ideas for you.
First, maybe some kind of self-vore with a french horn, since you play them with your own hand in the bell.
Then, not related to a specific instrument, but maybe a story where someone turns out to not be squishy enough and gets stuck halfway into the instrument.
Anyway, looking forward to whatever you decide to write!

AllRightAllNight

Posted by AllRightAllNight 6 months ago Report

Those are both great ideas! Will add them to my list of things to write, thanks :)

Superwedgie

Posted by Superwedgie 6 months ago Report

Glad to hear that!