"Sometimes when dealing with folks in the city, you're thrown a curveball (A fun little idiom I picked up at a place known as a baseball park!), in the case of those consumed at a gymnasium, that might be in the form of overwhelming strength... I had a bit of a miscalculation when I assumed someone who had just been exercising would make for a weakened meal, but little did I know, some people give '110%' to everything they do... And that kind of effort really wears a girl out."

So I tried cell shading a little bit, we'll see what other stylistic changes are done in future. Personally I think it looks fucking awful but if you like it let me know!

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