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The second episode in the Triple S saga:
Now a local celebrity, things are only getting more difficult for him and his new found friends. Danger lurks around every corner and it is only a matter of time before luck isn't in his favor.
Then, a mysterious and powerful woman offers him a way out. But is the deal safe, and can she be trusted? No... No she can't.
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Posted by MechaSharkZilla 6 years ago Report
I had a much worse idea of where Vallory put him. I'm glad I was wrong.
And again, sharp objects. Children. Do not let them interact. At this rate, Tripp is going to become a seasoned guerilla fighter.
Posted by surtech5 6 years ago Report
That is no joke what I originally was going to have happen. But I changed it to something easier and less invasive to better match the more 'serious' tone of the scene.
And yes Trip is a wild one twice in a row. IF I continue this I don't know if I should make her stab more people. Like shes done it in every episode so far so... Is it a punch line now? I dunno at this point.
Posted by Eclipseneko51 6 years ago Report
I really enjoyed both of those, i like how the girls went from almost eating Everett to protecting him from anyone else trying to eat him and Everett is incredibly lucky he's almost been eaten so many times and not been killed.
I'd love to see this continue but I don't mind if you just leave it at that.
Great work.
Posted by surtech5 6 years ago Report
I maybe wouldn't say Everett is lucky, considering where he is and how he got there XD. But Thank you!
And I do plan on continuing this someday, just not sure when.
Posted by Eclipseneko51 6 years ago Report
Yeah I guess you have a point there and that's alright