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TL;DR
In this apparent saw fan fiction (read more at the the bottom of the desc), two people (with stupid names I got from a random name generator) are forced to play the world's weakest Jigsaw trap room. This room pits prey against pred in a full reversal. However, the encounter is spiced up as the inexperienced copy-cat killer accidentally places the prey and the pred in the wrong chambers.
How will the prey survive now that the pred has all the advantages? Or even will he? Well the tags say digestion so... probably not.
Find Alternate Endings here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/493582
Full story:
This is the 11th entry in my Nut November challenge. Technically it's the 12th one I made but I arbitrarily released this one a day earlier because of a comment someone left one of my previous stories kinda almost hinted they wanted a story with dating a pred... kinda? I make my own rules!
Also, this doesn't take place in the 'Jigsaw Universe' (If that is a thing), but instead in the 'real world' where the saw movies exist and someone is trying to copy him based off the movies... Does that count as fan fiction? I legit can't tell.
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Posted by Altimos 6 years ago Report
Well, that was pretty good... until the end. The ending was... meh. I was actually expecting something totally different :3
But the lead up was certainly hitting all the marks for me. The ending took the wind out of my sails. Thanks for the story though XD
Posted by surtech5 6 years ago Report
'The End' as in like the last few lines that suggest he's gonna get melted down after not too long, or just when the killer reveals herself?
Posted by Altimos 6 years ago Report
When she threw him up... You didn't have a regurgitation tag when I read it, looks like it's up for approval now. Honestly, if you ever want to know my direct input on the matter, just PM me. I don't like to openly critique peoples work in public unless they request it (Like Karbo likes to do with his artwork).
But like I said, up to that point it was a great story, at least for me :3
Posted by surtech5 6 years ago Report
Um, sure. And yeah I didn't even know that was a tag. I don't know too many tags outside of what I personally search for so I leave them open.
If it makes you feel better originally she was supposed to decide to keep him, but as the story progressed I realized it would have been way out of character.
So then it was, well Jigsaw would put her too sleep again and it could be an accidental. but I didn't really know where to take it after that or how she would really take that, so I went with revenge.
Posted by Altimos 6 years ago Report
It's cool, always take the story where you want to take it. What I like isn't what everybody will, just do you XD
Posted by minasan 6 years ago Report
Well I quite liked this version. Then again I like when a predator has a lasting partner even while they eat other people. I'd like to see more of this even as she eats other people even while with him.