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Dion is fed up with life. God doesn't answer his prayers but he knows someone who might. Hearing the call to action, a demon appears before him, readying to do whatever it takes to take his soul to her side... Weather he likes it or not.

This is the 13th story in my Nut November challenge and it was odd for sure. It's only half the story, yet it's stand alone.

See I wrote a 1,200 word or so intro explaining Dion's freshman college life and why he's mad at God but... Honestly it was necessary, and if anything it made him less relatable. So I ended up with pretty much only the 'split endings' that were now the entire story.

I considered leaving them in the same file but... It was essentially two different stories by that point who just happen to share the same set up and main character.

And here's the other half "Dear Heavenly Father" where it's an angel:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/492839

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gva274

Posted by gva274 6 years ago Report

"The demon took out a pocketbook from her back pocket and scrolled through it muttering ‘swallowed’ to herself as she did. “Oh… Vore? Is that it?”" Oh god I'm dying at that image.

surtech5

Posted by surtech5 6 years ago Report

You weren't the only one dying

Dooot

Posted by Dooot 5 years ago Report

The story is good but this guy is honesty your worst protagonist yet. He had no clear anything.