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Tharian returns, but he's now a target for his rivals who have deep enough pockets to find something willing to fight a dragon.
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Posted by Stalbon 5 years ago Report
I quite like the tale, my friend! If I wanted to say anything, it's that at the end of the meeting with the lawyer, he says 'Your fee', wherein I think he might mean 'My fee', instead? Or 'our agreed-upon fee' of any sort. I think there was also a place near the end where 'and' mistakenly took the place of 'an', but I can't find it at the moment.
Regardless, it's lovely to see Tharian again, and to see that he's continuing to grow in the best ways! My appreciation to you for posting another fine tale. <3