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This story based on a 2 part comission by hitiri and aaron the mario characters in this story I don't own nintendo owns them
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Posted by Cbarb 6 years ago Report
Would you like some constructive criticism?
Posted by 10younameit 6 years ago Report
Kind of but not really
Posted by Cbarb 6 years ago Report
it was a good story, but if you don't want any advice on writing then I won't bother you with it.
Posted by 10younameit 6 years ago Report
thats okay I am planning to maje an update to thus story fixing some problems but hey contat me on deviantart I a few questions on two stiroes yiu did alien's meal and The War
Posted by Cbarb 6 years ago Report
Ok
Posted by Cbarb 6 years ago Report
Is your username the same on DA?
Posted by 10younameit 6 years ago Report
No but it's Tazer1125
Posted by 10younameit 6 years ago Report
Hey did get me note on deviantart yet.
Posted by 10younameit 6 years ago Report
Hey did you get my note on Deviantart
Posted by 10younameit 6 years ago Report
Hey just want to know are you going to reply back on deviant art?
Posted by Wolfofrage 6 years ago Report
I love this please write more I want to read what happens next