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This is a short and simple vore story. Once upon a time, in a land now lost to legend…
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Posted by Kasra 6 years ago Report
Man, sorceresses are jerks, aren't they?
Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report
They can be, when they're in a hurry! Or at least, this one can.
Posted by ThickAsHoney 6 years ago Report
Non-human prey is not my thing, but I found this interesting enough to read. It's alway cool to read a story where the world and the characters are fleshed out a bit instead of the story being entirely focused on being erotic. The actual vore was brief, though.
Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report
Thanks. I do prefer to know a bit about the characters in any vore situation, and there can't be a story without proper characters, I feel.
Ah, well for the swallowing scene I preferred to focus on the 'pred', so it would have been difficult to have an extended vore scene. She simply drank and swallowed.
Posted by Shawpony 6 months ago Report
Any plans for more like this
Posted by Littledude 6 years ago Report
Was expecting a heron to get him, but a cute girl is better!
Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report
It certainly is. ;)
Posted by Scrumptious 6 years ago Report
Cute little story! It was well-written (as always), and did keep me wondering what twists and turns we would see between the opening and the swallowing.
I did somewhat miss the prey's perspective of the swallowing, though. But, it's obviously your artistic choice to not include it.
Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report
Thanks. Ereg the little fish certainly had a bit of an adventure, before he was swallowed down by a cute girl. ;)
Posted by Avenger233 2 years ago Report
I haven't thought that a Story without digestion scene can be so interesting!Nice work!
Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.