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Okay, so this is just an experiment. An experiment I say !
So obviously I'm into vore, but I've also been into mpreg. I don't really see those things matched up that often. So I decided to take a shot at it. More importantly I decided to write this story because I wanted to see how I felt about it. Ultimately, I understand it's not for everybody. That's okay, but I'm sure someone will appreciate this. I'm not sure if I'll ever write another story like this again. I guess it'll just depend on if people like it or not. Please don't be afraid to leave comments especially with this story. I really do want to gauge opinions. So for people that have not clicked away yet and do want to read this story please enjoy!
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Posted by Catalyst 6 years ago Report
Experiment succseful
Posted by Kodsa 6 years ago Report
:D !
Posted by TotalBlazing 6 years ago Report
Quite good, never realised i was into mpreg until now, keep up the great work, and i hope to see a lot of great stuff from you in the future
Posted by Kodsa 6 years ago Report
Thank you
Posted by Houyo 6 years ago Report
Damn. Dude's who are just virile enough to knock up anything are the best. I'm jealous, but I'm not sure of who.
Posted by Kodsa 6 years ago Report
Yeah a guy who was able to just knock up anyone was just a really hot idea to me.
Posted by CalfskinSmack 5 years ago Report
I enjoyed this story a lot. My main "complaint" about the story is that the vore happened too quickly. I prefer detailed descriptions of slow, sensuous swallowing, but that's not what you were going for here, and that's fine. I also would have liked more detailed sex scenes, although the shower scene was pretty good. I would have liked a scene of him fucking Kaden before devouring him, but I guess he was too loyal to Gabriel to do that, and I like that. What I really liked about the story was Asher's genuine attraction to Chad, how he wanted to kiss Chad a second time (and perhaps more?) rather than devouring him, how much he loved Gabriel (as well as lusting for him) and how much Gabriel loved him back, and how he loved helping people have children, even though he had to eat (and thereby kill) other guys to do it.
I'm assuming that Donovan was Asher and Gabriel's second son, the one Asher gave birth to, but that wasn't clear. I would have liked a bit more information about Donovan, and Asher's "extended" family.
Delightful story overall, though.
Posted by Kodsa 5 years ago Report
Thanks for the feedback! Now let me, let you inside my head a bit (cause i don't get to talk about these stories/ characters/my thought process enough). So, like it says in the description this was me really just wanting a story with vore and mpreg. The vore was meant to be quick to relay how hectic the situation was for Asher. However I think your complaint is also valid, because I also love reading a really well written description. I will admit though after writing so many stories and when my brain is on burnout it's hard to not write "(He/the cock/it) swallowed (him/them)" and call it day.
As for Asher I see him as (ignoring the eating people) a good person, who genuinely cares about others well being.
Also yes Donovan was Jackson's younger brother (Asher's and Gabriel's second son.) He's the same Donovan in my other stories "The Pledge" and "The Initiation." Those stories are meant to also be stand alones so they're not explicitly tied to this story. Even with those stories I was exploring more of my interest. So they deal with their own themes. Ultimately I didn't want anyone going to Donovan's story looking for mpreg cause that's not what either one was about.
Glad you liked the story!
Posted by SleepyFighter 5 years ago Report
You know I wouldn't mind getting eaten by someone like Asher. It would be a good way to go by becoming one with a pred like him and make him bigger and stronger.