Posted by Higuain 6 years ago Report

Gasp! Could it be?

Yay! A Cainam work!


And one that did not disappoint~. Definitely worth the wait. As always, the detail never fails~. Excellent job.

Posted by Rothar 6 years ago Report

I like the way the story was written after the knights showed up, the colorful descriptions of their frantic flailings and fruitless attempts to beat the dragon resembling alot of scenarios from childhood cartoons. Minus the NSFW bits.
I feel the only thing pulling away from it was the swearing. Not a huge fan of excessive swearing overall but in here since it was written with very colorful characters and like some old-timey cartoon but with a lewd and more grim outcome I felt the cursewords pulled away from it a bit. Would've liked it more if it stuck to that cartoony innocent feel and then you just had the gruesome and humilitating deaths of the princess and knights.

Either way a very good story, well done!

Posted by Cainiam 6 years ago Report

Never really thought about how swear words can tank a scene for someone. I can see why, especially when featured in a fic banking on classic fantasy tropes and with a dose of cartoonish shenanigans. Something to think about in future. Thanks for the comment!

Posted by Philosoraptor 6 years ago Report

Well written and fun story with lots of great description. It was actually quite realistic in showing how dangerous and impossible to kill something like a huge, intelligent dragon would really be, unlike how easy they are to kill in stupid video games and most stories with villainous dragons there for heroes to slay. "Delivering" the wannabe slayers back to the king was an especially nice touch. One thing that seems a bit inexplicable though was how the four victims were essentially digested together in the same stomach, yet somehow got sorted out into individual turds. The amount of scat also seemed way too excessive as much of their bodies would have been absorbed and utilized by the dragon as is the whole point of eating food. As a person's body is over half water, more of their mass would have been pissed away than shat out in the first place (so mentioning the urine was a nice touch most writers seem to forget about). Unless you mentioned that she also ate a wagonload of oatmeal for breakfast before the rescuers arrived, or a whole bunch of the princesses' guards were eaten when she was captured, but there remains were not defecated yet, then the amount of scat was grossly exaggerated. I personally didn't care for the Princess somehow being liquified in her pussy, because reproductive organs simply don't work that way though it would have been a safe place to stow her away during the fight and then either keep her as bait for the next bunch of rescuers or have her for dessert knowing that her rescuers had failed and she would soon join them. Kind of funny that the dragon's pussy was actually more powerful than her true digestive system which couldn't even dissolve bones like normal reptiles do. But all in all an enjoyable story, so the least I can do is provide a thoughtful and constructive critique. Thanks for sharing!