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The game is on! Frostbite and Nightmare begin to employ their respective strategies, while player three enters the game in an entirely different way!

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Happy new year! Last upload of 2018. As a year in review, I did a lot of writing, but it all went up in smoke, didn't it? Well, good news on that front, because I'm working on getting my ass back in gear! If you're waiting on The Quest of Enlightenment, Kollo, or Alchemy Lab adventures, I Will be continuing them in 2019. ALA will be going through some broad changes as I restart it, namely the alchemy system and probably a number of other mechanical changes that'll make it simpler and more story focused. I definitely went overboard with the details! Anyway, look forwards to that and sorry for the wait!

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Graywolf18

Posted by Graywolf18 6 years ago Report

As on board with team Nightmare as I am, introducing a cute lil' drider lass is a good way to upset that balance. However, having said that I think I find myself drawn to the nameless one on the recieving end of her masters fellatio there at the end. She might not be in the competition but that doesn't mean she's immune to our love.

Arthotus

Posted by Arthotus 6 years ago Report

There was always going to be a third contestant. As for the unnamed vampiress helping the main bad decide the little details, she'll probably remain out of the main view for most of the story. She's not playing after all.

twilightwings

Posted by twilightwings 6 years ago Report

I dont have much critical to say other than that I wish you had a link to previous chapters in the descriptions you write.

Other than that it was great, my love for Spider Girls has her as my instant vote for winner.

Arthotus

Posted by Arthotus 6 years ago Report

I'll consider the previous chapter links, but I thought it was an issue I solved by lumping my more continuous stories into folders.

She has an equal chance to win as the other two!