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Twilight's Turn By doomfister -- Report

Twilight sparkle has become obsessed with the snake that has eaten Fluttershy in the story ( https://aryion.com/g4/view/490609 ) she has convinced herself that she has to experience such horrors for herself, the implications of such things tickling her fancy, what happens next could only be described as mistakes were made.

story to go with the twin images I commissioned that can be found here

https://aryion.com/g4/view/502242

https://aryion.com/g4/view/501648

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Slimshod

Posted by Slimshod 6 years ago Report

While the mode of death was slightly disappointing, it was a perfect method for this kind of situation. The pacing and meticulousness of it all made the moments of terror all the more exciting. Very good work, dude.

doomfister

Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report

i wanted it to be her hubris that would get her, and the fact she couldn't seal her nostrils made it perfect and ironic, as she had took the time to get a device that could allow her to breath theoretically until she melted, but she forgot that acid could backflow down her muzzle. literally drowning with a infinite source of air in her mouth. glad you enjoyed it :)