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The final chapter, here at last. What will happen after the big reveal last chapter? Will Sam make it home without becoming a meal? Will Alice turn out to be a hentai tentacle monster? Read on to find out!
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Posted by TotalBlazing 6 years ago Report
Incredible story, and a great conclusion too. Keep it the great work
Posted by dcvfgb1234 6 years ago Report
Really loved it. I've loved the entire series and am sad that you're saying this will be the last installment.
I definitely wouldn't mind reading more stories about Debbie, Alice, and Sam.
I initially thought that you'd have the antacids not prevent digestion (think they only neutralise acid, but not enzymes, but not sure).
For favourite parts then definitely when Sam was in Alice' and Debbies stomachs. I really liked your descriptions of how the stomach moved and worked.
Generally I really like description of how the stomach/intestines affect a micro.
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
Well I'm not ruling out writing additional stories with these characters, it's just this arc is done and finished. I was commissioned to write more chapters after the initial three, where I planned to leave it a while to work on other stories.
"I initially thought that you'd have the antacids not prevent digestion"
Generally speaking, if there is a proper relationship or friendship going on, you won't find me making one of the characters die, at least, not in my own stories. A specific commission of course would be different.
I also like some good internal descriptions, noises, movements, etc. Something that is often lacking in so many vore stories. The lack of that sort of content is why I started writing in fact :D
You'll likely enjoy the next chapter of my Amazonian story ;) I just need to finish it. 10,000 words in and still got a way to go :| I suspect I'll split it in two at this rate.
Posted by dcvfgb1234 6 years ago Report
Makes sense not to make proper characters die. And to tell the truth, then I like it that way. Reason I thoguht it was how you had written that it was the final story, so I thought that Sam might die given how it was listed as the final one. Seems I misread what you meant.
In any case then I actually am glad that Sam didn't die. Now, it would have been hot as hell to have the antacids fail and see the fallout of that, but it also would have stung since I really like the dynamics you've got going with Alice, Debbie, and Sam.
That also says a lot about how well you got these stories written that you got me to care enough about the prey to actually want them to survive as opposed to the usual, where I'm quite indifferent to whether they survive or not.
So yeah, kudos to you!
And yeah, goof internal descriptions often are lacking. It's part of why I've started getting written commissions too, actually. XD
Looking forward to it. Not sure I've actually read the previous installments, though, since off the top of my head nothing really surfaces. Though, to be fair, I've read so many stories over the years that I might just have forgot the name. (Initially I'd forgotten the name of the first three stories and had to tag search for them for half an hour when I wanted to reread them. (This was back when they had the original name, i.e. before being renamed to KINKS.))
Posted by nick222238 6 years ago Report
The is one of my favorite Vore series. Be awesome to have a non-canon fatal ending. With either Alice or Debbie. Like if Debbie actually gave into her desires when she made Alice swallow him and she continued having sex with her. Or when Alice made Debbie swallow him, they didn't have anti acids and Debbie wanted to instead rush to Kinks. Then she got stuck in traffic and he was pushed into her intestines before she could think to throw him up.
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
That’d be an interesting alternative ending. I’ll have to see how commissions and other things pan out.
Posted by AndAnotherOne 6 years ago Report
Aww what a happy ending... 9 months later alice gives birth because as a lesbian she didnt think she would need to take birth control and Sam had cum inside her, even though it was tiny. Dont you love plot twists? XD
Posted by Gershwin 6 years ago Report
Hahaha a tiny tiny baby. Awkward for Sam and Debbie too!
Posted by akinata 4 years ago Report
i am a bit relieved that the accident wasn't a death but a revealed secret.
nice vore story overall.
Posted by Gershwin 4 years ago Report
Thank you :) yes, I don’t usually do death stuff, at least not in a story that is otherwise fun and between people so close.
Posted by MrRonny6 4 years ago Report
Hot dang, that was absolutely amazing! You basically made me fall in love with all of this stuff again
Posted by Gershwin 4 years ago Report
Happy to hear you enjoyed it, thank you for your lovely feedback!