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A Betrayal of Love By pizza3695 -- Report

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Alex loves her stallion Lance, but as she'd grown older, responsibilities had forced her to spend time elsewhere. One night, betrayal comes for her.

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chechico

Posted by chechico 5 years ago Report

Hopefully the hordie wont get punished D:

Also spraking about keeping his master close

JustNothing

Posted by JustNothing 1 year ago Report

So I just wanted to read through your gallery and give each one a little feedback.

This story was definitely good. Short and esay to digest like someone else. I love horses and think they are top preds anyway. (in my head)
I wished Lance forced more to Alex than just being food but that's my personal degenerate opinion. I like Alex and her family. The ending is open for literally anything the reader want which by short storys is a good thing imo.

8/10