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Be careful when you're walking home. You never know when you might run into a very hungry and persuasive girl!
Compliments and/or critiques welcome! Let me know what you think.
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Posted by Altimos 5 years ago Report
I'm not one for willing prey, but everything else hit the mark for me, especially the taunting. Damn, the taunting was seriously on point <3 <3 <3
Posted by Omnium51 5 years ago Report
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! <3
Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report
I've been trying to include some pred-prey taunting in my own writing, but damn, this is too good! The way she's so fixated on her goal, completely in control sexually as she entices him in. The disregard she has for him, not wanting to hear his name etc. I love it <3
Posted by Omnium51 5 years ago Report
Thank you! <3 I tried to make the taunting a focal point in this story, emphasizing the way that Darcey saw and treated Jeremy as nothing but another meal. She's hot and she knows it, and is going to continue using that advantage to get lots of free meals!
Posted by ToweringValkyrie 5 years ago Report
Amazing as usual! So happy to see more stories from you :)
Posted by Omnium51 5 years ago Report
Thank you! <3 I always appreciate your support for my stories! :)
Posted by Dooot 5 years ago Report
Fantastic
Posted by Omnium51 5 years ago Report
Thanks! :)
Posted by Dooot 5 years ago Report
Can I make a request?
Posted by Omnium51 5 years ago Report
You can, just know that I may or may not want to do it. I'll hear you out though, so go ahead!