Posted by anonpls 5 years ago Report

Amazing, always loved your work. nice to see you back in the writhing seat

Posted by Omnium51 5 years ago Report

Thank you! :) I'm glad you enjoy my stories.

Posted by pendingdele60236b325 5 years ago Report

I've never enjoyed cleavage vore outside of some artwork, but this was really well done!

It would have been interesting to get a few more paragraphs from Ken or Noah's perspectives about the sensations and experience of been consumed like that, and in some areas it was a little unclear what angle they were being consumed from exactly.

Just a personal kink suggestion as well: for willing participants, feet-first can be fun. Would give Cheryl an opportunity to talk with them a bit more as they disappeared. Also makes some oral service and a nice kiss on the lips possible on the way down before their head slips out of sight.

Anyhow, loved the story - keep it up!

Posted by rugli 5 years ago Report

I have to agree on about the angles they were consumed by but I would have loved absolutely willing version of this story for both Ken and Noah

Posted by Omnium51 5 years ago Report

I felt that semi-willing and unwilling prey worked better for the story in this case. It would be a fun variation though!

Posted by Omnium51 5 years ago Report

Thank you for the compliments and for your input as well! The angles were a bit awkward to describe, but I hope it didn't detract from your enjoyment of the story.

I really like your idea about oral service or just generally having a pred use their mouth during breast/cleavage vore. I'll strongly consider it for future stories!

Posted by doomed 5 years ago Report

All of my favorite writers are back !!!

Posted by Omnium51 5 years ago Report

Thanks for including me in your list of favourites. :) Out of curiosity, who else is in your list?

Posted by doomed 5 years ago Report

Alissabluebird , ryanshowseason3, you, voidinvoid, and marloweny. Y’all haven’t written a story I dislike like . There are other authors I like but they have left or they have only done s few stories I like or they stopped writing

Posted by doomed 5 years ago Report

I kinda wish ken had done a better attempt at fighting back , it just seem a little unfair

Posted by Omnium51 5 years ago Report

Nobody said being prey was easy. ;) Ken got caught off guard and now he's tit fat.

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

I reread this , and I still think he should’ve punched her in the face and gave her a black eye or broken nose . Would’ve been some justice for the poor brother lmao

Posted by ToweringValkyrie 5 years ago Report

He finally did cleavage. I can die happy

Posted by Omnium51 5 years ago Report

I'm glad you liked it! But you're not allowed to kick the bucket without writing some more great stories of your own first! :P

Posted by ToweringValkyrie 5 years ago Report

Deal >_>

Posted by anonymous19999 5 years ago Report

cleavage vore never makes sense to me on a visceral level but the story around it was just right

Posted by Omnium51 5 years ago Report

Thanks! It's a weird type of vore for sure, definitely requires a bit more from the imagination than other types. I find that breast/cleavage vore has something of a dream-like quality to it that appeals to me. The fact that it doesn't quite make sense makes it hotter to me in a strange way.

Posted by humanpopcycle020 4 years ago Report

I'd be a food willing supplement

Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report

I'm sure Cheryl would appreciate that ;)