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Short story to try and get myself out of a writing slump. Too many half finished stories. Hope everyone likes this quickie!
Formatting was really weird with this one for some reason, but I think I got it to work.
Compliments and/or critiques welcome! Let me know what you think.
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Posted by Animagra 4 years ago Report
Well written. :)
Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
YESSSS!!!! You’re back , ugh I wish you were a horrible writer so I wouldn’t be so dedicated to waiting all the time
Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report
Haha thank you!! Good things come to those who wait ;)
Posted by ToweringValkyrie 4 years ago Report
Really great story. I love the idea of graciously eating someone without knowing what they even look like
Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report
Thank you! :) It's a very fun idea, and adds another layer of casualness to already sexy and casual vore scenarios.
Posted by Hawkeye7 4 years ago Report
Nice story, loved the concept of someone 'unknown' making their own way inside. :)
Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report
Thanks! :) It was certainly a different approach, and a bit weird to pull off, but fun to write for sure!
Posted by BlissfulDreamer 4 years ago Report
Glad to see another story!
Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report
Glad to provide it! :)
Posted by Tafillia 4 years ago Report
~<3
Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report
<3 <3 <3
Posted by NewRebellion 4 years ago Report
If you're in a slump, maybe you just need someone to jostle your creativity? Give you some ideas. Maybe writing out a few requests might help?
Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report
I mostly was lacking inspiration/time to write. I'm still not really into taking requests or commissions right now. I do have plenty of ideas, don't you worry about that! Writing this story helped for sure.
Posted by furtherbean321 4 years ago Report
You've got to write a sequel to this, even if it's just as quick. Shannon showing up to a date late because she ate someone, using her belly to convince her date to let her eat them, and then doing a scene between the first and second meal where maybe they fuck inside her. It nearly writes itself!
Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report
It's definitely on the table! We'll see what happens next time the writing urges start flowing, I've got a few other stories with sequel potential as well ;)
Posted by furtherbean321 4 years ago Report
That's great to hear. And yes, you certainly do. In the meantime I might take a crack at writing a sequel myself, a bit of fan fiction. I'd post it here but I can't figure out how to do that
Posted by Omnium51 4 years ago Report
Usually you PM Eka to get a gallery started. If you want to write some fan fiction based on my characters, go right ahead! As long as you credit me for the originals, I'm sure I'll be fine with whatever you end up writing!