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Making another submission. I'll stop pestering the tags at some point. I wrote this one with no editing from people, (because I actually hate asking for help, I don't want to bother people :/) so if this one seems especially lackluster, that's why.
Inspired by that tumblr post about a tiny dragon protecting a one-coin hoard. Except with vore.
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Posted by Peptidase 5 years ago Report
I really love this concept and execution. The dragon is cute and I love the tumblr post it came from. The revenge vore aspect of it was a nice plus as well. I could easily see a sequel to this about Cyrus just scarfing down coins if you were so inclined to make one.
The only editing nit pick I'd have is where you say "taller than 100 dragons his size" when in context some variation of "100 times his length" probably would have made more sense. Otherwise the writing felt pretty solid!
Posted by ThatWeirdo 5 years ago Report
Thanks :) I'll keep that phrase in mind for future body size comparisons of the stomach. Also, I'm glad you liked it!
Posted by Readasaur 5 years ago Report
I love everything about this!
A tiny predator, the revenge, and especially the places Cyrus grew the most. X3
Beautiful!
Posted by ThatWeirdo 5 years ago Report
Thank you! I am glad that you liked it
Posted by boomer91 5 years ago Report
awww thats so damn adorable
Posted by ThatWeirdo 5 years ago Report
Thanks, I think micropreds are cute too :)