Posted by Katojana 18 years ago Report

GREAT!!!!! I love this story. this is very cool.sadly no digestion but anyway awesome.

Posted by Anonymous 18 years ago Report

im like too the images of the dog who ate a human of a normal size ,much.

Posted by Hermit20 18 years ago Report

Your a great writer I can understand the whole not killing Hinata thing. I would like to see somebody else get eaten I don'y know maybe Sasuke. (hates Sasuke) or Sakura.

Posted by Anonymous 18 years ago Report

Great story. Love, Hinata too just for the record but could you make an alternate ending of this story too. And mabye a story where Hinata is the vore trying to get rid of the compotison for Naruto's love. I can just it: Hinata getting rid of Sakura, Ino, Tenten, and mabye just to be safe Hanabi. Well, what ever. Bye.

Posted by luke 16 years ago Report

hey its me agian great story but try if you can try to make the same thing but its in the format of a magna chapter

Posted by luke 15 years ago Report

someone made a pic of this stroy

Posted by rocklee908765 15 years ago Report

yeah luke it was on writing.com this is going in my favorites

Posted by luke 14 years ago Report

it would be asome if someone made a manga,ha a vore manga,dont see those often,trust me you have to jump through flaming hoops before you find one.

Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 11 years ago Report

Very well told. And I'm glad you decided not to digest Hinata. Maybe next time, she'll be a lot more willing to let him eat her out of peaked curiosity. >///w///>

Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 11 years ago Report

And don't be sorry. You did some good not killing her for the sake of a fetish.