Your a great writer I can understand the whole not killing Hinata thing. I would like to see somebody else get eaten I don'y know maybe Sasuke. (hates Sasuke) or Sakura.
Great story. Love, Hinata too just for the record but could you make an alternate ending of this story too. And mabye a story where Hinata is the vore trying to get rid of the compotison for Naruto's love. I can just it: Hinata getting rid of Sakura, Ino, Tenten, and mabye just to be safe Hanabi. Well, what ever. Bye.
Very well told. And I'm glad you decided not to digest Hinata. Maybe next time, she'll be a lot more willing to let him eat her out of peaked curiosity. >///w///>
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Posted by Katojana 20 years ago Report
GREAT!!!!! I love this story. this is very cool.sadly no digestion but anyway awesome.
Posted by Anonymous 20 years ago Report
im like too the images of the dog who ate a human of a normal size ,much.
Posted by Hermit20 19 years ago Report
Your a great writer I can understand the whole not killing Hinata thing. I would like to see somebody else get eaten I don'y know maybe Sasuke. (hates Sasuke) or Sakura.
Posted by Anonymous 19 years ago Report
Great story. Love, Hinata too just for the record but could you make an alternate ending of this story too. And mabye a story where Hinata is the vore trying to get rid of the compotison for Naruto's love. I can just it: Hinata getting rid of Sakura, Ino, Tenten, and mabye just to be safe Hanabi. Well, what ever. Bye.
Posted by luke 17 years ago Report
hey its me agian great story but try if you can try to make the same thing but its in the format of a magna chapter
Posted by luke 17 years ago Report
someone made a pic of this stroy
Posted by rocklee908765 17 years ago Report
yeah luke it was on writing.com this is going in my favorites
Posted by luke 16 years ago Report
it would be asome if someone made a manga,ha a vore manga,dont see those often,trust me you have to jump through flaming hoops before you find one.
Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 13 years ago Report
Very well told. And I'm glad you decided not to digest Hinata. Maybe next time, she'll be a lot more willing to let him eat her out of peaked curiosity. >///w///>
Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 13 years ago Report
And don't be sorry. You did some good not killing her for the sake of a fetish.