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It's been awhile! on another site I got told one of my stories took too long to get to the vore. I know it's not for everyone but I love scene-setting for my stories. It makes it feel more intimate when the inevitable happens, but hey that's just me. I'll try to be a bit more aware of it. Anyway here's a nice short story for you. No long waiting required!
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Posted by Lengban 4 years ago Report
Honestly the world building and scene building you do is really nice! I know the "get to the good part" mentality exists and I can get that way for some things, but I think you do it well!
As for this particular story, it's great. Fun unaware bit of vore and love how someone got to witness it all and figure out how to explain it. :3
Posted by Kodsa 4 years ago Report
Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it!
Posted by Narkotic 4 years ago Report
I hope there would be a continuation to this story. It's always so fun reading from you!
Posted by Kodsa 4 years ago Report
Same to you,I love reading your stories! As for a continuation nothing is planned , but if inspiration strikes I'll definitely write it.
Posted by wetcardboardbox 4 years ago Report
Honestly I thought that was a great amount of scene setting/build up. It's nice to have a little background so you can wonder who's gonna eat who and how and whatever else might happen