Oh crap, I just realized reading the "profile" Alina did that this is the same Rebecca from "Collar"! A sense of continuity is rare in these stories. You're doing great with this.
Also, you do a really great job of characterization. I don't really know how to feel about Alina because she's a stalker, but I also can't hate her because she's trying to save someone. So I have to root for her even though I'm a bit disturbed.
Not sure how much I support Alina being a blatant stalker, but that ending was really sweet. Also you're doing an incredible job with characterisation.
I fucking love this character!!! She is so determened and awkward at the same time. She is pathetic in a way that makes you want to give her a push to keep up the fight. I am seriously rooting for her.
Posted by VVVx 5 years ago Report
Oh crap, I just realized reading the "profile" Alina did that this is the same Rebecca from "Collar"! A sense of continuity is rare in these stories. You're doing great with this.
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Posted by VVVx 5 years ago Report
Also, you do a really great job of characterization. I don't really know how to feel about Alina because she's a stalker, but I also can't hate her because she's trying to save someone. So I have to root for her even though I'm a bit disturbed.
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Posted by VVVx 5 years ago Report
That talk at the end also makes it hard to dislike her.
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Posted by Progressive 5 years ago Report
It is the same Rebecca, some years later.
Alina is supposed to be a flawed but redeemable character, so I'm glad that you are conflicted about how to feel about her.
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Posted by threk 5 years ago Report
Not sure how much I support Alina being a blatant stalker, but that ending was really sweet. Also you're doing an incredible job with characterisation.
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Posted by TastesUndivided 5 years ago Report
I fucking love this character!!! She is so determened and awkward at the same time. She is pathetic in a way that makes you want to give her a push to keep up the fight. I am seriously rooting for her.
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Posted by Progressive 5 years ago Report
Alina is a great character for telling this story. I'm glad you're rooting for her.
And thanks for leaving a comment - I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
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Posted by TastesUndivided 5 years ago Report
I sure am so far. Currently at part 4
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