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A Prize Not Worth The Risk By Pharo -- Report

Benny is a very hungry mouse and is willing to try anything to get a decent meal. Such desperation leads him to try and steal an egg from a goose's nest. The only problem is that the mother goose is still sitting on them.

Calamity ensues that leads to him filling her belly instead.

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This is a re-edit of a story I put up on my FA page a few years ago. Found here --> http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1397645/ I think this one turned out a lot better, good to see that my writing has improved a little bit.

Please let me know what you think. :)


4,098 Words


As always, if you find my work moderately acceptable, consider dropping by my Patreon! --> https://www.patreon.com/Phero_Foxdale Where you can get early access to my future works as well as get a glimpse at rough drafts I have in work.

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Posted by 349qg853437tr48tr 5 years ago Report

Hehe... Ben and Jerry~

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Posted by 349qg853437tr48tr 5 years ago Report

Hehe... Ben and Jerry~

Pharo

Posted by Pharo 5 years ago Report

Oh... well look at that. Nice catch. :P