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Draken has been having a bit of trouble with his hostage. He does what he can to keep her alive and safe while he waits for her father to bring gold, but it is unclear if she will survive long enough.

Final part of the Debt Collector story. I hope you guys have enjoyed it!

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Alpha025

Posted by Alpha025 5 years ago Report

Its good to accept your faith when your family fails you. There is alteast someone keeping his Promiss while those where you gelieve in seem to have other prioritys.

Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report

Well, I can't say more than that I feel a bit sorry for the poor girl, being betrayed like that by her very own kind in such a way. It seems like Draken also was disappointed in more than one way as well. At least he meted out some kind of revenge!

DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 5 years ago Report

Yeah that was kindof depressing to write. It's why I prefer karma vore.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 5 years ago Report

Any chance the scat was from the princess decoy, and the hostage was spared to be drakon pet. The scat scene could of been a bluff.

After all drakon did feel bad for the girl, and the girl seems like she could be taught to be a good pet unlike her dumb father. It the smart call,

DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 5 years ago Report

I can see how that scene could be interpreted as such. If Mary is still alive as Draken's pet is your headcannon, then perhaps that's what ultimately became of her.