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Violet and Luci are two best friends/enemies, rivals at everything, but friends all the same. Mostly. And now they have found another area to rival each other in: a race. The wager is simple. One first to get acros a jungle filled with monsters and through a city filled with succubi gets the prize: one month of the other as their pet. Considering all the monsters and succubi, anyone else would be a little afraid, but not these two! Every time they die, they come back none the worst for wear, although having to experience life as something's bowel movement until they come out the other end can be a little annoying.

In this chapter, the two girls start their journey, and begin to work their way across the jungle...

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So here it is, the much hyped Halcyon and Vivid Lucidity collaboration: the Voracious Wager! A massive, three month project we both worked very hard on, and couldn't wait to see it be released. We had a massive ball with this, and we hope you do too! Due to the sheer size of it, it will be split across ten chapters, which will be released in turn.

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Halcyon

Posted by Halcyon 4 years ago Report

Woohoo! We made it!

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 4 years ago Report

That we did! Thanks again for your contribution to all of this!

amerdism

Posted by amerdism 4 years ago Report

Hey so I was wondering what the various characters in each story look like, most importantly violet and Luci.

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 4 years ago Report

Truth be told, I'm not entirely sure. I believe they're human, but that's all I've got. You can imagine them to be whatever you like really.

amerdism

Posted by amerdism 4 years ago Report

Fair enough, though to be honest some parts of the story can be confusing, mainly I’m trying to figure out what size each character is constantly, ones big enough to have sex with a wolf boy, but I’m not sure how big they are, I assume human size so what’s that make the harpy? A giant? And the other seems to be shrunken down going by how she fit in the crocodiles mouth and held onto a single tooth to prevent being swallowed. These little details are abit of a pain to figure out.

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 4 years ago Report

True, true, I'll admit that much. Both of the characters are pretty much human sized, it's just that some of the predators are much bigger than you'd imagine. Guess I failed to describe the crocodile's size good enough.

amerdism

Posted by amerdism 4 years ago Report

It’s a problem I noticed in several chapters. Not a big deal, eventually it clears itself up, but it is still confusing as a result.

BACKxDOORxPLEASE

Posted by BACKxDOORxPLEASE 4 years ago Report

Day 23 still reading the tags

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 4 years ago Report

What can I say, there's a lot stuff in the story for the tags to cover.

BACKxDOORxPLEASE

Posted by BACKxDOORxPLEASE 4 years ago Report

I know just wanted to make a pun

NonBinaryFuta

Posted by NonBinaryFuta 4 years ago Report

This is brilliant!! so many different fun situations, love how it reads like texting, so casual and fun, praise the feminine penis!!

VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 4 years ago Report

Why thank you! You're one of the first people to leave a nice comment about it!

NonBinaryFuta

Posted by NonBinaryFuta 4 years ago Report

Feminine penis is amazing and acknowledging she is a woman is just so heart warming!! I know it's a fetish thing but it feels great as a trans person to see stuff like this :) Great work, loved the part with the crocodile.

Halcyon

Posted by Halcyon 4 years ago Report

(Other player here) Thanks so much for your kind comments! Also, for what it's worth, I am committed to improving and doing my best to portray these ideas as respectful as I can to real-life identities, so if you have any suggestions on ways I can do better at that, please don't hesitate to message me at any time. Thanks again!

NonBinaryFuta

Posted by NonBinaryFuta 4 years ago Report

It was great, just using the right pronouns based on how people identify is awesome, sure, it would be nice to see someone go by they/them like a futa or something, but hey it's what people are into that matters more because hot stuff is hot and that matters a lot.

thelandcruzer

Posted by thelandcruzer 4 years ago Report

I know what you mean.
That might be why I haven'n done any futa/herm content yet.
The two stories that I'm work on now have gender transformation in them. It can be hard to change pronouns when describing the same person. With them being the same mentality and just in a different gendered body.(It can be a mental workout!)

thelandcruzer

Posted by thelandcruzer 4 years ago Report

Still a great rp story.
Can hardly wait for the next one

NonBinaryFuta

Posted by NonBinaryFuta 4 years ago Report

Yay, they escaped, that was great, and Violet even got a prize :D