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Luci makes her first entrances into the big, scary city of Pluto. There, a most horrifying discovery is made! Will Luci and Violet be able to overcome this new problem and reach The Spire?
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Posted by Halcyon 5 years ago Report
Woohoo! We made it!
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
That we did! Thanks again for your contribution to all of this!
Posted by amerdism 5 years ago Report
Hey so I was wondering what the various characters in each story look like, most importantly violet and Luci.
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
Truth be told, I'm not entirely sure. I believe they're human, but that's all I've got. You can imagine them to be whatever you like really.
Posted by amerdism 5 years ago Report
Fair enough, though to be honest some parts of the story can be confusing, mainly I’m trying to figure out what size each character is constantly, ones big enough to have sex with a wolf boy, but I’m not sure how big they are, I assume human size so what’s that make the harpy? A giant? And the other seems to be shrunken down going by how she fit in the crocodiles mouth and held onto a single tooth to prevent being swallowed. These little details are abit of a pain to figure out.
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
True, true, I'll admit that much. Both of the characters are pretty much human sized, it's just that some of the predators are much bigger than you'd imagine. Guess I failed to describe the crocodile's size good enough.
Posted by amerdism 5 years ago Report
It’s a problem I noticed in several chapters. Not a big deal, eventually it clears itself up, but it is still confusing as a result.
Posted by BACKxDOORxPLEASE 5 years ago Report
Day 23 still reading the tags
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
What can I say, there's a lot stuff in the story for the tags to cover.
Posted by BACKxDOORxPLEASE 5 years ago Report
I know just wanted to make a pun
Posted by NonBinaryFuta 5 years ago Report
This is brilliant!! so many different fun situations, love how it reads like texting, so casual and fun, praise the feminine penis!!
Posted by VividLucidity 5 years ago Report
Why thank you! You're one of the first people to leave a nice comment about it!
Posted by NonBinaryFuta 5 years ago Report
Feminine penis is amazing and acknowledging she is a woman is just so heart warming!! I know it's a fetish thing but it feels great as a trans person to see stuff like this :) Great work, loved the part with the crocodile.
Posted by Halcyon 5 years ago Report
(Other player here) Thanks so much for your kind comments! Also, for what it's worth, I am committed to improving and doing my best to portray these ideas as respectful as I can to real-life identities, so if you have any suggestions on ways I can do better at that, please don't hesitate to message me at any time. Thanks again!
Posted by NonBinaryFuta 5 years ago Report
It was great, just using the right pronouns based on how people identify is awesome, sure, it would be nice to see someone go by they/them like a futa or something, but hey it's what people are into that matters more because hot stuff is hot and that matters a lot.
Posted by thelandcruzer 5 years ago Report
I know what you mean.
That might be why I haven'n done any futa/herm content yet.
The two stories that I'm work on now have gender transformation in them. It can be hard to change pronouns when describing the same person. With them being the same mentality and just in a different gendered body.(It can be a mental workout!)
Posted by thelandcruzer 5 years ago Report
Still a great rp story.
Can hardly wait for the next one
Posted by NonBinaryFuta 5 years ago Report
Yay, they escaped, that was great, and Violet even got a prize :D