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So. c107galaxytachyon asked me if I could write a thing for him about... oh look, six months ago. I finished it today. I hope it's worth somethin'.
Basically, Kimihito from Monster Musume is sick again and Suu is taking care of him. Things happen. If you don't know what Monster Musume is, go look it up. It's got snek tiddies, horse tiddies, and a dumb little birb.
On one hand I feel the ending isn't complete, on the other I think it's a fine tribute to the ways hentai mangas/doujinshi traditionally end... With a stupid joke.
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Posted by C107galaxytachyon 5 years ago Report
I’ll say I’m satisfied, though.
Posted by Apex 5 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by C107galaxytachyon 5 years ago Report
That being said, if you ever do want to continue this saga, go right ahead: I won't mind.
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 5 years ago Report
Somehow missed this until just now. Cool Story!
Posted by Apex 5 years ago Report
Thanks! The idea wasn't mine, but I'm glad I did it some justice.
Posted by Mrinfo 3 years ago Report
I think what is missing from the ending is that you didn’t get to explore what body sharing would do to Kimohito and Suu in the long term, nor did you have much fun exploring how they interacted from now on.
Posted by Apex 3 years ago Report
I get what you're saying but what I was referring to in the description was a lack of "punchiness" to the ending that really made it feel like the end of a story. It's more like I felt I didn't have the proper sentence or two to end the story with rather than like I had ended the story as an incomplete concept or plot arc.
Thank you for reading and commenting.