Ayyye. Likeminded people such as you are rare when it comes to Mineta. I'm actually disappointed I didn't kick up the proverbial hornet's nest with this story.
He's slightly less of a menace. That definitely helps making writing him easier. Not that he wasn't a bit much, but sometimes people exaggerate it a lot and he ends up as a punching bag.
He's perfectly capable of being a decent guy...who just happens to be pervy for someone his age. He's much more intelligent than he appears(canonically he's surprisingly one of the smarter kids in the class), he's just always...'distracted', so it's not immediately noticeable.
And if you know you know, his recent major moment in the manga upped my respect for him immensely.
I...I actually adore the fact that you used Eri's Rewind as a plausible in-universe reason for reformation to be possible. That's REALLY clever. I really like that.
By the end of all this, their shared mortal enemy is stairs. Their luck with stairs is just AWFUL here.
Mineta is something of a personal taste for me as far as vore goes, so it's nice to see that someone else agrees he just needs to tone it down a notch (And it isnt like theres not worse pervs in media - looking at you Master Roshi.)
And yea, using Eri's Rewind for 'fixing mistakes' makes writing MHA vore a *lot* of fun. (Although my writing does show its age in older fics like this.)
Aizawa is already tired all the time, so dealing with this on a daily basis is draining his soul.
Eri, meanwhile, is just happy to help.
Aizawa's reactions to these shenanigans is my favorite. Before he would have bluntly decided to quit(which Nezu would cheerily turn down, calling his bluff) but now he REALLY can't quit because he's Eri's official guardian, and this is a way she can use Rewind kindly.
So he kinda just has to grit his teeth and put up with it. It makes him an excellent straight man.
(Don't worry, for an older fic it does pretty alright! :D)
You'd be eternally tired too if your students were super-powered teenagers with an appetite (whether intentional or accidental)for human flesh. Luckily Eri is both there and also willing to lend a hand :).
Posted by TheInquisitor 5 years ago Report
A surprise to be sure. But a welcome one.
Seriously, I like this alot.
Posted by tankbuster626 5 years ago Report
Ayyye. Likeminded people such as you are rare when it comes to Mineta. I'm actually disappointed I didn't kick up the proverbial hornet's nest with this story.
Posted by DarkOniPrince 5 years ago Report
Really good! I just wish it was longer
Posted by DoctorDischord 5 years ago Report
This story is pretty great...but that ending is just amazing XD
Posted by tankbuster626 5 years ago Report
Thanks!
And yea, I went for a rather...bold approach.
Posted by DoctorDischord 5 years ago Report
I think it worked rather well. Mass vore is pretty underrated, and it sounds like all those gals look pretty good as a part of the grape lad!
Posted by tankbuster626 5 years ago Report
I'm sure all of them, plus the vast majority of the MHA vore fandom, would disagree.
Posted by Robotdocter 5 years ago Report
yeah no lol, mineta is very disliked by a ton of people.
Posted by tankbuster626 5 years ago Report
I have a soft spot for the little fuy, and I'm gonna make sure he gets some love.
Posted by Robotdocter 5 years ago Report
to each their own, i understand
Posted by CommodoreNeil 1 year ago Report
A wild Mineta appears!
He's slightly less of a menace. That definitely helps making writing him easier. Not that he wasn't a bit much, but sometimes people exaggerate it a lot and he ends up as a punching bag.
He's perfectly capable of being a decent guy...who just happens to be pervy for someone his age. He's much more intelligent than he appears(canonically he's surprisingly one of the smarter kids in the class), he's just always...'distracted', so it's not immediately noticeable.
And if you know you know, his recent major moment in the manga upped my respect for him immensely.
I...I actually adore the fact that you used Eri's Rewind as a plausible in-universe reason for reformation to be possible. That's REALLY clever. I really like that.
By the end of all this, their shared mortal enemy is stairs. Their luck with stairs is just AWFUL here.
Posted by tankbuster626 1 year ago Report
Mineta is something of a personal taste for me as far as vore goes, so it's nice to see that someone else agrees he just needs to tone it down a notch (And it isnt like theres not worse pervs in media - looking at you Master Roshi.)
And yea, using Eri's Rewind for 'fixing mistakes' makes writing MHA vore a *lot* of fun. (Although my writing does show its age in older fics like this.)
Posted by CommodoreNeil 1 year ago Report
The contrast between Aizawa and Eri is funny.
Aizawa is already tired all the time, so dealing with this on a daily basis is draining his soul.
Eri, meanwhile, is just happy to help.
Aizawa's reactions to these shenanigans is my favorite. Before he would have bluntly decided to quit(which Nezu would cheerily turn down, calling his bluff) but now he REALLY can't quit because he's Eri's official guardian, and this is a way she can use Rewind kindly.
So he kinda just has to grit his teeth and put up with it. It makes him an excellent straight man.
(Don't worry, for an older fic it does pretty alright! :D)
Posted by tankbuster626 1 year ago Report
You'd be eternally tired too if your students were super-powered teenagers with an appetite (whether intentional or accidental)for human flesh. Luckily Eri is both there and also willing to lend a hand :).