I love the story, but if I had any suggestion it would be to draw out the final devouring. It was sliiiightly anti climactic <3 but still great overall
Thanks for the feedback. That wasn't my intention, but I definitely understand so I'll keep that in mind! On another note, any update on "To The Victor Goes The Spoils Part 2" :P ?
Posted by boomer91 5 years ago Report
I love the story, but if I had any suggestion it would be to draw out the final devouring. It was sliiiightly anti climactic <3 but still great overall
Posted by Kodsa 5 years ago Report
Thanks for the feedback. That wasn't my intention, but I definitely understand so I'll keep that in mind! On another note, any update on "To The Victor Goes The Spoils Part 2" :P ?
Posted by boomer91 5 years ago Report
Working on it I promise ;)
Posted by Whitesnake 5 years ago Report
Great story! Love the slow buildup and attention to detail.
Posted by Kodsa 5 years ago Report
Thank you!