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Milly's exchange. By Heimko -- Report

Vmaster608 (https://aryion.com/g4/user/Vmaster608) requested me to write something with their minotaur girl Milly. There was no real direction with the story besides some content they wanted in it, so much of it is improvised. The ending in my opinion feels a bit rushed, but i ran dry on ideas or how to continue it. Still hope you all liked it.

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awakener

Posted by awakener 5 years ago Report

I’m not sure if it cut off because I was on mobile, but it cuts off at “the other minotaur’s massive…”

Heimko

Posted by Heimko 5 years ago Report

It's because you're on mobile, it happened to me to when i was on mobile.

UnknownPerson9876

Posted by UnknownPerson9876 5 years ago Report

Yeah, you need to hit the download button, or open button depending on what you see, then you'll be able to read the full story.

UnknownPerson9876

Posted by UnknownPerson9876 5 years ago Report

Not bad Heimko, not bad. A few spelling mistakes here and there, and the events jumped a lot of time, but besides that the story was pretty solid my friend- I can't wait to see what you'll do next!2

Heimko

Posted by Heimko 5 years ago Report

I used docs for the spelling, so there might have been a few misses here and there.
Thank you very much! I can't wait to see the next part on your side either! :)