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Took me long enough to make this. Two years it took me. Mainly because I had to figure out just HOW to continue on after the last one and make it so the ending to X-Bellies wasn't disrupted. Then I got writers block...
So yeah, enjoy.
P.S. this is a sequel to this Stepford stomach: https://aryion.com/g4/view/404635
Second submission for Vore day 2019
Posted by Deviantfan16 5 years ago Report
I actually really liked how Stepford Stomachs ended
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Posted by Naganommer 5 years ago Report
I suppose I did take away from that ending by making this.
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Posted by Deviantfan16 5 years ago Report
Seeing them all come together did really give a sense of completion while also letting them have potential for the future. Namely having roughly 6 Minds blended together in one. Maybe the others would find out, but not be particularly surprised by it given how they've been acting and the Cuckoos Disappearance
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Posted by Naganommer 5 years ago Report
Yeah. Honestly I was probably better off leaving the story alone and making it non canon with the rest of my X-men stories instead of trying to fix the continuity. Because I set these two stories before the epilogue in the final chapter of X-Bellies so I felt obligated to set things right by that epilogue. I think one of the reasons it took so long to make this is because the last story didn’t need to be fixed.
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Posted by Deviantfan16 5 years ago Report
You know I think you could work with the Celeste set up in the Last story for the Future. Alternative Timelines and stuff are abundant in Marvel as you know
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Posted by Psionicull 5 years ago Report
Oh good story, good drama. I liked Marrow being paid after the sex. I'm kind of interested in a regular character in a story accepting payment and the next thing you know she's turning tricks for the person in question. Emma slowly turning her that way would not surprise me (nor at ALL displease me).
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Posted by Naganommer 5 years ago Report
Thanks. Seducing someone and paying them to stay silent seems like a thing Emma would do.
I kind of like that idea of a girl turning tricks being adapted to vore. I might use it in the future.
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