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Well here it is my first ever official commission and ho-boy did this take a while. This is probably the longest thing I've written and shared publicly, but I'm honestly really proud of it. Especially because the commissioner wanted a crossover of my two most popular characters; Jess the pregnant comic shop owner and Lami the magically pregnant tsundere...oh and Kaku is there too.
I had a lot of fun writing this and a big thank you to Qwerty2999: for being so patient and understanding while I tried to make this happen. Also thanks to him for also getting a cover pic from Olympic-dames: who did fantastic work.
So please enjoy the story!
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Posted by Kohud 4 years ago Report
This was lovely, shame he didn't take that offer, but then again Lami is a total cutiepie.
Posted by Zagine 4 years ago Report
Lol I'll let everyone else decide who "best girl" is.
Posted by Bellyl0ver 4 years ago Report
I think this is the first written story of Kaku and Lami. Hope there’s no e in the future.
Posted by Zagine 4 years ago Report
Hope there's what in the future?
Posted by Bellyl0ver 4 years ago Report
More written stories. The comics and single images are pretty great, but I feel like a multi chapter story or even a single chapter story does a better job going I to detail. But, that’s just my opinion. You’re the one who comes up with the ideas and pays for commissionss, I just enjoy the artwork.
Posted by Zagine 4 years ago Report
Oh no I totally understand. If I had the time to write about them more I would, however I feel pictures grab more attention than just the written word, but that's just me.
Now in terms of a comic going into more detail...stay tuned ;3
Posted by Pumabird68 4 years ago Report
Maybe add illustrations next time?
Posted by x9comega 4 years ago Report
He’s not an artist smart one
Posted by Zombina983 4 years ago Report
*Looks at the pic on the very top of the story* Hmm...I dont see any illustrations here
Posted by Pumabird68 4 years ago Report
I meant the next story starring these 3.