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Coils and Coochie (Gift Story) By Cryos -- Report

I am NOT sorry for this title.

I got into a mood to write a lamia pred for the first time, and I'm thirsty as hell for cute boys getting destroyed, so I borrowed  Bloodle8's bun boy Toby so he could get stuffed in snake lady pussy and *die.*

the pred might show up in later works, but for now she is just a very large, unnamed snek.

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right2fail

Posted by right2fail 5 years ago Report

Everything about this story is wonderful. From the descriptive writing to the submissive and helpless male party to the dominant and sultry tone of the lamia. I love it.

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right2fail

Posted by right2fail 5 years ago Report

The only complaint I would make is that thw bunny boy was shot out of her as cum at the end, instead of remaining trapped inside to be absorbed or digested, but that really just comes down to personal peeference. It's an excellent story.

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Cryos

Posted by Cryos 5 years ago Report

Thanks so much, I'm glad to hear that you liked it! Yeah, the ending simply came down to preference in the end, but I can respect how you feel for it <3

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bloodle8

Posted by bloodle8 5 years ago Report

Wow, ok, first of all, I've never done anything wrong in my life how could you attack me like this

Second of all *aaaaaaaaa* I love it, thank you so much ;u;

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Cryos

Posted by Cryos 5 years ago Report

first of all, this wasn't an attack, it was a warning shot, coward. Get Nae Nae'd. Second of all, I'm overjoyed to know you like it so much <3 I'm always open to doing more with you sometime~

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Ruco

Posted by Ruco 5 years ago Report

AMAZING!!! This story hits so many kinks for me!

I love the slow seduction and mind controls aspects, the prey utterly helpless to resist. And as far as run absorbed vs squirted.. I’d say it’s both. You don’t absorb everything from a meal, do squirt out the “leftovers”
Which I LOVE!!!
Weather it’s cock vore or Unbirthing, I LOVE a pred that squirts afterwards

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Cryos

Posted by Cryos 5 years ago Report

I'm glad to hear that you liked it!

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Ruco

Posted by Ruco 5 years ago Report

Indeed so! I hope you may make more like this!

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