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With the final malicious psychic taken down, could normalcy return to Sabrina’s life? A draining meeting with the Kanto League Board and a horrendous dream based experience say otherwise. Confronted by the phantoms of her previous meals, Sabrina finds herself in a dreaded situation that could be the end of her… and yet, what awaits her when she awakens?
The second to last of the Psychic’s Meals main entries is here after a long time. There were a lot of difficulties I had with this one, many ideas of how I wanted to handle the events I had laid out for this just kept coming and I wound up making a significant change during one of the last days that changed how the whole second half was going to play out. And of course, because I’m me, I slipped in a few dumb things for my own personal amusement. I mostly played around with the premise of where the meat of this piece takes place in and I’m sure you’ll notice that as well.
Also a daily reminder Cactus is probably the only Pokémon fic writer on this site who does world building and does it properly since a certain company can’t be asked to do it. Sorry that my flaunting and literary flexing are hitting pretty close to home, but that’s just how it is. Besides, it’s not like anyone even reads these things, right? After all, nobody reads stories am I right?
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Posted by Flame14 5 years ago Report
Hmm, wonder if the twins added to Sabrina’s ‘twins’ if you get my meaning. It’s a shame that this is coming to a close as it’s such an enjoyable scenario to read about. I do hope Sabrina will show up in more of your future works.
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 5 years ago Report
All things must eventually come to an end. I was tempted to have a bit at the end where Tate and Liza decided to reside on Sabrina's chest, but decided to cut it out since I felt the story was long enough and it would have required more explaining given the bit wherein the dream ends. Now while the main series for Psychic's Meals will come to an end, there will be side stories for it.
Posted by Deviantfan16 5 years ago Report
I was wondering if Sabrina's meals would come back since there psychics too. Kinda glad the twins get to stay. I do hope they take up residence on her "twins" by next time.
Posted by C107galaxytachyon 5 years ago Report
I’m going to guess my talks with you weren’t at all coercive into your decision to write this: were they?
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 5 years ago Report
I had this planned out in advance like I do when I set myself on writing a series. Aside from the next boost to her powers, Sabrina still has the same appearance she had from the previous story.
Posted by C107galaxytachyon 5 years ago Report
Oh: my mistake, then.
Admittedly, though, I do have to doubt the legibility of the “fatal” tags in your entries leading up to this one: as its somewhat misleading to label them as such if Sabrina only just now offed them for good.
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 5 years ago Report
All of those are still fatal in the sense Olympia, Caitlin, and Murray were digested and reduced to being psychic shadows of their former selves stuck on Sabrina and waiting for the one chance to take revenge upon her. Their presences on her were so minor Sabrina barely even noticed them.