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The Weighing of the Heart By Smuxray -- Report

My hard-on for Egyptian mythology finally comes out in full force: a short story featuring a liberal interpretation of the traditional transition into the afterlife, with thicc jackals and soul vore. My hope is to pique some curiosities as well as wet some loins with this one, because although it is shamelessly fetishized, it is also based on real gods and real mythology. I have yet to think of a good way to fetishize my favorite Egyptian myth, though; that being the journey of Ra through the twelve kingdoms of the night.

Anyway, hope you enjoy this tale featuring Anput (the female version of Anubis—yes, she was a real god who existed in mythology) devouring some guilty mortal souls.

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wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 5 years ago Report

Egyptian-themed jackal vore, with actual attention to the myths and inclusion of Anput, who I've never seen used in vore before?? From one of my favorite authors?? I'm in heaven ;)

I love the vivid description of the scenery in your story, as well as your characterization of Anput as a harsh-but-fair goddess who still has no objection to a nice meal. Moreover, I'm usually not a huge fan of soul vore, but you make it work wonderfully with this pred (for obvious reasons). I also like the way we get to see your digestion *twice*, both body and soul, and I'm always a huge fan of stories where you end up as padding for a hot jackal-goddess ;)

...I wrote a story based in Egyptian mythology a while ago (albeit more with a jackal char playfully cosplaying/roleplaying as Anubis in a kinky way, rather than the actual mythological figure). I'd love to hear your thoughts, by the way, if you have a moment! Story (https://aryion.com/g4/view/543246) and art (https://aryion.com/g4/view/540771).

Btw -- I originally had the jackal-girl in my story acting as Anput, but nobody who read it got the reference, so I threw up my hands and described the jackal-girl as "genderflipped Anubis". Hopefully your story can get more people to recognize Anput as a legitimate goddess in her own right, and a good predator for kinky stories like this :3

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 5 years ago Report

Oh, sorry, I forgot to attach this -- some context for how I adapted Anubis to a vorish context for the universe I write in: https://aryion.com/g4/view/540751

I'd always be happy to chat about Egyptian mythology as applied to vore, if you're in the mood ;)

Smuxray

Posted by Smuxray 5 years ago Report

Just gave it a read! Very fun story, I’m glad you pointed it out to me. I loved the description of Bella’s hallucinogenic transformation into her goddess state, and the whole invented history of the god Anubis. I’d love to chat about Egyptian lore and vore junk sometime, shoot me a PM and let me know where a good place to reach you is!

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 5 years ago Report

I really appreciate your thoughts (and kind words)! I'm a relatively new writer, so advice from an experienced writer on what I do well and what I don't helps me improve immensely :)

(I'll send you that PM now.)

ReaperOmegaV1

Posted by ReaperOmegaV1 5 years ago Report

Good story!
Keep up the good work!

TootCore

Posted by TootCore 4 years ago Report

That one was wonderful.

Aelvir

Posted by Aelvir 3 years ago Report

Props to you on this one! I always see people call a female Anubis as...Anubis instead of the proper Anput.