inktober10 by pbysteria

Posted by RediQ 5 years ago Report

Uhh this rules, you definitely made it hot.

Posted by pbysteria 5 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm still not sure what qualities to work on for them but I guess I'll look around and see what I like.

Posted by RediQ 5 years ago Report

I guess if I were to try to constructively criticize this, it's that the gut could be.... "realistically" tighter. A little more physical discomfort for her in the pose, little more obvious that the stomach walls are stretching out to accommodate her shape, as opposed to a girl sitting inside a roughly-sphere-shaped room. All sexy stuff, though as a non-artist I'm not gonna pretend like that's easy to do.

And like, some of that is already present to some degree, so you did it super well for a first internal! Plus, showing intestines (especially noisy ones) instantly elevates any stomach internal by a huge amount so like.... whew, yeah, this pic gets to me~

Posted by pbysteria 5 years ago Report

Thats some good input. I'll have to play around with what you mentioned. Glad you like the intestine bit, I really like them churnin away too.

Posted by SuperSpaceZone 5 years ago Report

Like this.

Posted by maniacalfork 5 years ago Report

that's VERY GOOD

Posted by Azuris 5 years ago Report

Pretty nicely done with those internals, especially with the smooth looking stomach walls. Looking forward to more like this if you every plan on it!

Posted by Joannabonana 5 years ago Report

WEW THIS IS REAL GOOD. Great use of the cellphone too :>

Posted by OsmiumOrchid 5 years ago Report

Hot ✓
This is great, love the lighting from the phone! You definitely nailed it for your first try at an internal view.

If you were looking for critique, I'd say that if this is meant to be same size like the tags suggest then the scale seems off. We can see the sphincters leading in and out(which is a detail I really like) and they're like the size of the girl's hands, which doesn't add up if she's the same size as whoever ate her. You'd also expect it to be much more cramped in that situation, like the walls were hugging her tight rather than leaving her room to move about.

But it's amazing as an internal in general! Great stuff

Posted by Hozomat 5 years ago Report

Seconding that. Lighting is great, and I like how blurry and wavy the acid is.
Sphincter and intestines are a really nice touch to add up to the feeling that the prey is inside a whole digestive system. But they do look a tad big.
It really feels alive, overall. Just a bit more claustrophobic atmosphere would make it perfect!

Posted by pbysteria 5 years ago Report

Good to know! From what it sounds like in general some more tightness would be good, and I think I agree with that. Will be a balancing act of crampedness and room to show things happening.