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This is my first submission to the site, so I would love to hear what you all think of it!
As for the story itself: Sandra lives with a bunch of other people, and sometimes they get a bit rowdy. Sandra is going to experience that firsthand.
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Posted by soline 5 years ago Report
This is a wonderful first submission!
I love the casual nature of the vore and Alice's response. Non-fatal 'entrapment' is always fun and Alice's casual attitude towards maybe just leaving her in place for the time being is lovely.
I'm definitely hoping we see more from you, and more of Alice!
Posted by Soulary 5 years ago Report
@Soline 100% agree! ^u^
Posted by threk 5 years ago Report
Nice work on your first piece, there's never enough non-fatal entrapment so looking forward to seeing what else you may come up with :)
Posted by Heimko 5 years ago Report
If i had to give some advice, make more space between the sections so it's easier to get around without getting lost or forgetting where you were when reading it.
Posted by NightFurr 5 years ago Report
Yeah, that's something I didn't really take into account when writing it. I'll definitely do this for future stories, thanks for the advice!