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This is my first submission to the site, so I would love to hear what you all think of it!

As for the story itself: Sandra lives with a bunch of other people, and sometimes they get a bit rowdy. Sandra is going to experience that firsthand.

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soline

Posted by soline 6 months ago Report

This is a wonderful first submission!

I love the casual nature of the vore and Alice's response. Non-fatal 'entrapment' is always fun and Alice's casual attitude towards maybe just leaving her in place for the time being is lovely.

I'm definitely hoping we see more from you, and more of Alice!

Soulary

Posted by Soulary 5 months ago Report

@Soline 100% agree! ^u^

threk

Posted by threk 6 months ago Report

Nice work on your first piece, there's never enough non-fatal entrapment so looking forward to seeing what else you may come up with :)

Heimko

Posted by Heimko 4 months ago Report

If i had to give some advice, make more space between the sections so it's easier to get around without getting lost or forgetting where you were when reading it.

NightFurr

Posted by NightFurr 4 months ago Report

Yeah, that's something I didn't really take into account when writing it. I'll definitely do this for future stories, thanks for the advice!