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I have never really been all the pleased with the original story so I decided to rewrite it and incorporate some new Ideas including an idea I got form immortalsane's dear verse, the Idea that with some help prey could heal from consumption so long as at the very least the prey's head was left intact. my version is a little different but it's still not my idea.
Immortalsane's Dear verse https://aryion.com/g4/view/561170
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Posted by SecretLadybug 5 years ago Report
Great rewrite compared to the original! The writing style for this one was really good and easy to read. Looking forward to future updates!
Posted by DragonMan200 5 years ago Report
Thank you. the writing style I used for the original was one of the largest reasons I rewrote it. I couldn't even read the original story it was so bad. next update will more then likely be in my alternate story line by the way
Posted by immortalsane 5 years ago Report
O.o I am delighted that I gave you an idea! Nicely incorporated, and a interesting take on it too!
Posted by DragonMan200 5 years ago Report
I'm a big fan of non fatal vore which is why I write stories to include some sort of reformation in them/imply reformation. so when I was reading stories from your dear verse I was impressed by your concept of healing, a method of reformation I had never considered before, I knew that I had to work it in some how(It was a very good idea after all). I'm glad that you liked the story by the way, and let me know if there is anything that you want me to write for you, I take requests.