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Pichawoo and his chuolf pack need to find food, and lots of it, for the winter. Lucky for the pack, their intrepid leader Pichawoo sniffs out a quiet, peaceful village to raid. Hunger is not the only urge to be sated as the pack of chuolves descend upon the unsuspecting village, enjoying some immediately while taking the rest home with them to enjoy in the coming winter times.
This story was commissioned by Lemonlen!
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Posted by Pkmnguy6262 5 years ago Report
Hm interesting, never heard of the concept of pichawoos but I'm open to give it a try. Haven't read it yet, don't have time rn. But still wanted to share my First impression. Have to be honest tho that I am a bit sad that it's only deerling prey, I assume at least, and a part of me hopes there will be a pred one as I love deerling preds but anyway. Will give it a read once I have time and am sure it's a good story nonetheless. Big fan of most your pkmn stories so far. Just kinda confused still what exactly a pichawoos is.
Posted by Pkmnguy6262 5 years ago Report
So, I read the story now. And it's a good story as usual. Still don't really have a picture of what a chuolf is and that ruins the immersion a little but still well written as usual. Just a little upset the deerling didn't had any chance to get revenge. Am hoping maybe in a future story you'll eventually write something with a deerling pred. Would be cool as it's a really underrated pred imo and I just love it. But yeah, great story as usual and I hope.you keep up the good work<3
Posted by lutro 5 years ago Report
If it helps any, here's a visual aid! https://www.furaffinity.net/view/34060774/
Posted by Pkmnguy6262 5 years ago Report
ah neat, thanks a lot it does help a lot^^ now i can appreciate the Story properly without having to be puzzled About that a chuolf Looks like xd ~~still wish itd be the deerlings Eating them lol XD~~