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Margaret's hard lesson. By Ediblestranger -- Report

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My first attempt at a story. Any and all critique is appreciated.

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Kabei

Posted by Kabei 2 years ago Report

Amazing story, loved the situations you had the characters in.

threk

Posted by threk 2 years ago Report

Brutal, cool story

arabicaj33

Posted by arabicaj33 2 years ago Report

Oh wow,that's really good story!
I've never been a big fan of the role of the victim and/or hard digestion and violence , but imagining myself beeing tied up, held, face-smothered by my captors and beeing slowly swallowed by some beautiful predator, knowing that it's gonna be even worse, makes me change my mind.
Thanks for sharing it with us!
lol finally registered here to leave this comment

Ediblestranger

Posted by Ediblestranger 2 years ago Report

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I hope I can continue to impress.

dcvfgb1234

Posted by dcvfgb1234 2 years ago Report

A really lovely story and I really liked how you made her win in the end. Definitely wouldn't mind seeing more from that universe, though after the two stories in it it might be hard to find something else to do there.

dcvfgb1234

Posted by dcvfgb1234 2 years ago Report

A really lovely story and I really liked how you made her win in the end. Definitely wouldn't mind seeing more from that universe, though after the two stories in it it might be hard to find something else to do there.