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Tags: Accidental vore Anthro Anthro Pred Anthro Prey buck Deer deer pred Digestion Fatal Female Prey Fox Fox prey Furry Furry Pred furry prey M/F M/M M/multiple prey Male Pred Male Prey Masturbation Multiple prey Multiple Preys Oral Vore Sex Tiger Tiger Prey Transformation Unwilling Pred Unwilling Prey Vore story
Evan is an unassuming college buck when one day he makes a shocking discovery. Will he be able to control himself? Does he want to?
A new vore series! I actually have several chapters written out, if people really enjoy this I'll release them early! I think we all know where Evan is headed.... ;)
Would LOVE to get feedback, creepy comments welcome!
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Posted by twilightwings 4 years ago Report
Pretty fun start. I have a few issues I"ll list in order to offer a critic.
The actual eating part has too little details. It ends about as soon as it begins leaving me to wonder what exactly happened. A little more detail with the vore would be appreciated.
Also a little building up of the characters (mostly Evan) would help makw me care a little more for his predicamwnt.
Other than that, a fun start :)
Posted by gimmickaccount12345 4 years ago Report
Personally, I feel that the lack of detail serves to emphasize the fact that this is all happening unintentionally before Evan realizes it.
Posted by aMagnificentBeast 4 years ago Report
That was my intention- by the tine he realizes what’s going on, it’s way too late- he’s pretty much in a blackout mode the first few times he eats. He’s defiantly going to feel pretty guilty as time goes on.
Posted by Jadex 4 years ago Report
Howdy just letting you know the title says seasom and is really funny to say
Posted by aMagnificentBeast 3 years ago Report
Fuck, you’re right, I never noticed