I tried writing something quick and nice while also being less brutal and graphic. But I ended up adding in some brutality and graphic nature as alternate endings.

I also tried to leave the characters a bit vague other than names (for convenience sake) so that people could imagine them how they like. If this is something people like I'll do it from time to time, but I do enjoy describing the characters in my stories. To me, at least, it makes them feel a bit more fleshed out.

There is no "true" ending, whichever of the three endings you prefer is your personal ending.

As usual, any and all critique is appreciated.

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