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I wanted to try a PoV style of writing. While this story is from the point of view of someone who is unwilling to be eaten I left out as much as I could dialogue wise, and to an extent action-wise as well, so you could imagine your own responses. And I kept description of the prey ambiguous so that anyone would hopefully be able to imagine themselves in its shoes.
As with my other stories there is an alternate ending for those who want it.
As always, any and all critique is welcome and appreciated.
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Posted by TanookiBoy12 5 years ago Report
Holy shit I love it! I love this type of predator!
Posted by Ediblestranger 5 years ago Report
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by Xylock 5 years ago Report
I love the descriptions you give, the idea of being mostly goop but still concious is a great concept!
Posted by Ediblestranger 5 years ago Report
I know it's a little weird, but it's always been something that's been intriguing to me as well. That, and it gives the ability for prey to be interacted with far longer than they'd normally be able to and that's part of the experience for me.