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A quick story involving some minor characters from my story "Margaret's hard lesson." It takes place after that story ends, not a sequel but kind of a continuation in a way or an after-the-fact side story. You don't need to read that one to enjoy this one.
As always, any and all critique is appreciated.
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Posted by algog8 5 years ago Report
how many can she crush in there and still pass as nothing significantly special?
Posted by dcvfgb1234 5 years ago Report
She seemed to be really athletic, so probably quite a few.
Posted by algog8 5 years ago Report
are we talking hundreds?
Posted by dcvfgb1234 5 years ago Report
I'd quite doubt it. Though it's not my universe, so I wouldn't be able to say. But I'd be quite surprised. My guess would be that she perhaps could take on 4-5 at the very most.
Posted by Ediblestranger 5 years ago Report
Not hundreds. Jessica is almost 6 and a half feet tall and the two girls she eats are significantly shorter, somewhere just under 5 and a half feet tall and also rather slim. That combined with the fact that Jessica is extremely fit, so her abdominal muscles would press her stomach in a bit. I figured it stood to reason that she'd be able to fit two people in her without attracting too much attention. But it'd still be visible and noticeable, hence why she looked for a robe of some kind to cover herself as best she could.
As for her maximum limit, I don't know. But it'd depend on the size of the prey as well. Without getting too silly I'd say probably a total of 2x~3x her size, not just height but mass as well. That said, nothing's set in stone. If I feel like eventually I want someone to get stupidly silly huge I'd do that and all bets would be off, so to speak.
Posted by dcvfgb1234 5 years ago Report
Considering how mucha faster Jessica's metabolism is compared to Beth's then I guess Jessica might actually have been the bigger pred? Since Beth appeared taking upwards of a week to process Rebecca.
Posted by dcvfgb1234 5 years ago Report
Interesting side story.