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Requested Alt-End by Anonymous.
Original story belongs to: https://aryion.com/g4/user/Brazzel
Original Story: https://aryion.com/g4/view/476945
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Alright, so something was pointed out to me that I actually think does need to be addressed to the story.
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(“Fuck off,” I grunted. This is where our situation began.
Winding back...)
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That segment right there, is where Brazzel's writing and mine, intertwine. At the, winding back, part is where I made my edits and put in the alternate ending.
So for those of you who haven't read the original, I suggest you do so to understand the alternate ending better.
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Posted by S1nZ 5 years ago Report
i prefer this over the original, nice work
Posted by Brazzel 5 years ago Report
(ง ͠° ͟ل͜ ͡°)ง
Posted by S1nZ 5 years ago Report
your's was good too. I just prefer non-fatal.
Posted by Brazzel 5 years ago Report
Only joking, my friend! I think that WillingWomb did a great job with this.
Posted by WillingWombPrey 5 years ago Report
Thank you.
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 5 years ago Report
Great alt ending, cute outcome for all involved