Thanks! I've been mulling over reformation in my head for years now without getting anything down, and I never liked it safe and neither willy nilly from anywhere anytime. :)
And I guess this was mostly a stab at the concept, hence no outfleshed setings. I'm pretty sure I'll reuse it in otehr more fullfledged scenarios.
You see Sarah was so rich and filled Adeline up to the point that some of it spilled over and Adeline accidentically put on a few pounds, to the point that her dress felt uncomfortable in places.
Not used to manage bodyfat as a source of energy she had to rummage her memmory and her laptop for the digital copy of her old notes back from when she was studying.
She still kept them around, eventhough as she found out that it had been over seven months since last she had a look in the folder they were in.
It took her nearly an hour to freshen up her skills, but after that there was still enough left of the day, and she such a high maintenaince woman, that she didn't even need to go and work out to burn off the few pounds of padding Sarah had given her.
Meaning Adeline was free of that the same day, in just a few hours even, where as Sarah would have to wait over a week before she was set free from her Adeline prison and by that time Adeline had burned off every single calori she'd gotten from Sarah, even whet her predator self had stored, that and much more, otherwise sarah wouldn't have gotten all that company she had as she finally disembarked.
How would it be possible, though? Nobody knows Sarah was misplaced and nobody, but Adeline, knows that she was in that drone and tried to communicate. Even if it was found out that she'd been in a drone Adeline disposed of, then Adeline just would say she had no idea and that Sarah hadn't managed to establish contact before teh nom.
As much as I'd like for Sarah to be avenged, then I just don't see any way it'd be possible to do in a way which isn't basically a deus ex machina.
There might be a recording somewhere. People who might inspect Sarah disappearance and know she arrived at the reformers but did not come back out, raising the question is there a critical flaw in the reformers, enough study into that might reveal she was a drone. Adeline Might stilll be able to play the no contact before nom card but her fate was revealed.
Posted by FutureBellyAche 5 years ago Report
Really unique concept, I liked it a lot!
Posted by Throku 5 years ago Report
Thanks! I've been mulling over reformation in my head for years now without getting anything down, and I never liked it safe and neither willy nilly from anywhere anytime. :)
And I guess this was mostly a stab at the concept, hence no outfleshed setings. I'm pretty sure I'll reuse it in otehr more fullfledged scenarios.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 5 years ago Report
I kind of hope she gets avenged and the world finds out in the sequal?
Posted by Throku 5 years ago Report
Not sure about avenged, but prehaps revenge.
You see Sarah was so rich and filled Adeline up to the point that some of it spilled over and Adeline accidentically put on a few pounds, to the point that her dress felt uncomfortable in places.
Not used to manage bodyfat as a source of energy she had to rummage her memmory and her laptop for the digital copy of her old notes back from when she was studying.
She still kept them around, eventhough as she found out that it had been over seven months since last she had a look in the folder they were in.
It took her nearly an hour to freshen up her skills, but after that there was still enough left of the day, and she such a high maintenaince woman, that she didn't even need to go and work out to burn off the few pounds of padding Sarah had given her.
Meaning Adeline was free of that the same day, in just a few hours even, where as Sarah would have to wait over a week before she was set free from her Adeline prison and by that time Adeline had burned off every single calori she'd gotten from Sarah, even whet her predator self had stored, that and much more, otherwise sarah wouldn't have gotten all that company she had as she finally disembarked.
Posted by dcvfgb1234 5 years ago Report
How would it be possible, though? Nobody knows Sarah was misplaced and nobody, but Adeline, knows that she was in that drone and tried to communicate. Even if it was found out that she'd been in a drone Adeline disposed of, then Adeline just would say she had no idea and that Sarah hadn't managed to establish contact before teh nom.
As much as I'd like for Sarah to be avenged, then I just don't see any way it'd be possible to do in a way which isn't basically a deus ex machina.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
There might be a recording somewhere. People who might inspect Sarah disappearance and know she arrived at the reformers but did not come back out, raising the question is there a critical flaw in the reformers, enough study into that might reveal she was a drone. Adeline Might stilll be able to play the no contact before nom card but her fate was revealed.