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Hello everyone. I am happy to announce that after an entire year of having my own profile, I have posted my first work here. It's my first vore related story so i'd love to here your feedback in the comments.
Also feel free to suggest names for Lilly's dad. I'll pick whichever I like the most and/or gets the most suggestions.
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Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 5 years ago Report
Cute story! But didn’t you already name her father David?
Posted by harpylove 5 years ago Report
That was my original place holder before I decided to ask the people. I guess I missed one in editing. Though if you think it fits I may use it as his permanent name.
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 5 years ago Report
You missed it several times in the opening paragraph lol the name is fine so I’ll vote for it
Posted by harpylove 5 years ago Report
By the way, I'm already working on my next story, but as a monster girl expert, would you like to suggest a species for a future story?
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 5 years ago Report
Thanks, but you do you. If I have an idea for monster girls, I’ll write it myself. ;-)
Posted by harpylove 5 years ago Report
Fair enough.
Posted by Tyslan03 5 years ago Report
Awesome story! Always happy to see cute, little preds gobbling down adults. Keep up the great work!
Posted by harpylove 5 years ago Report
Thanks. The small pred was actually inspired by your work. It's good to get a comment from another literary vore veteran.