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Vore Comm bought from Coolwoman
NOT made by me, i commissioned the person above to write this story.
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Posted by Santaman 5 years ago Report
Nice, I enjoyed the story, though as a fetish writer, i would go more in detail about certain aspects, like touch, senation, contractions, feelings, ect.
and explain the shape the victim is in, like cramped, forced into fetal position, ect.
Hope this helps